Unfortunately you really were off more than once in this song. I listened to the whole thing and there were about 2.5 times you were off beat. It's a good song, just try to keep on beat in the future songs you submit. If you're aware that it's choppy, why not fix it and then submit it. Either way, I'm still favoriting this!
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